一、寫作步驟： skim the question and write the introduction
2. input the topic sentence.找出問題所在，一個問題一句話
3. develop the body paragraphs one by one.逐一展開問題段落，按重要性遞減的規律展開
4. conclusion
5. checking
二、開頭段的寫作：
找出原論證的.結論或主張，指出原論證的論據和假設，指出原論證的邏輯錯誤。
忠實的保留原始信息。用自己的詞保留原始信息。
In this argument / analysis, the arguer concludes / claims thatTo support / justify the conclusion , the arguer points out / provides the evidence thatand thatIn addition , the arguer reasonsthat
This argument suffers from several critical fallacies / flaws.
三、SURVEY問題：
vague = misleading
2. question: what questions will ask in the survey? Loaded questions有誤導性的問題
3. Who
4. Average平均數不適合於每個成員
5. Confusing causal relationship with correlation混淆因果關係與相關性
Every causal relationship implies a correlation, but the statistical correlation does not necessarily implies a causal relation.