雅思寫作5.5的原因

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英語寫作爲什麼突破不了5.5?可能是下面的原因造成的,下面是小編整理的一些一用就可能會5.5的句子,大家一定要慎重!

雅思寫作5.5的原因

y coin has two sides (任何事情都有兩面性)

這個短語我相信是個土生土長的中國學生都用過吧。雅思寫作又是以議論文爲主,所以此短語就更能派上用場了。有的同學會問:這個短語我從初中用到研究生畢業,有什麼錯嗎?我考四級也用它、六級也用它,考研也用它?爲什麼現在才告訴我不能用了?

這個諺語在雅思寫作中"was very much overused"。雅思寫作考官一起打分的時候會"mock this expression (proverb) and say to our colleagues, 'I've found another one!' and laugh."

考官的心情:it was rather annoying, boring and disappointing to read such unoriginal language。

We prefer to read something new and interesting rather than read language that has been used many times before.

but not least(最後但並非最不重要的`一點)

大家看到這個短語很驚訝是嗎?我們的老師不是反覆告訴我們,寫作文要有層次感,要有連接詞。比如:Firstly, secondly, last but not the least!嗎?

真實情況是這樣的:"Last but not least"這個短語通常用在口語中,所以是informal的表達。而且這個短語的意思是在介紹三個人或物時,說到最後一個時這麼用。

考官是這麼舉例的: 比如你在介紹部門成員的時候,你這麼說 "First, this is Mr. Wang. He's our new assistant accountant. Then we have Miss Li, who is a new receptionist , , last but not least, we have Mr. Lin, who is our new website manager."(你把人家放到最後介紹了,但是要說明不是因爲不重要就放到最後介紹。避免別人不高興。)

如果你確實想不到其他詞或短語了,就直接用"Last" or "Lastly"

3."With the development of science and technology, ...".(隨着科技的發展)

考官說:這個是典型的Chinglish,他問:你們寫作文都這樣開頭嗎?我無言以對。

這麼寫不對嗎?

人家原話是這麼說的 “ This phrase is not wrong or bad English and there are topics where it is suitable to use. But it just became overused and misused.”

考官,舉個例子好嗎?什麼情況下是misused?

“Do you think students have too much homework?" and the first sentence the essay was, "With the development of science and technology, ...". Boring.

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