商務英語中級寫作樣題解析

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商務英語中級寫作樣題解析

連詞:because, since, for, so;短語:because of, due to, owing to

表示感謝:

Thank you very much for...; I would like to thank you for...; I am very grateful for...; It was very kind of you to ...

獎勵:

A rise in salary of X%; A bonus of X% of your monthly salary; A trip to Hawaii/Athens/Maldives

需要注意的是,商務英語要求正式文體,較之非正式文體,其有以下常見特點:

正式 非正式

Headquarters, September (不簡寫) H.Q. Sept. (縮寫)

schedule, discuss (精確動詞) set, talk about (寬泛動詞或詞組)

A copy has been sent. (被動語態) I sent you a copy. (主動語態)

形式

最後需要考慮的'就是備忘錄的形式。正式考試時,文字題目下方會模擬商務實際,附上備忘錄開頭片段,包括To, From, Date, Subject等細節,但是考生不必直接在片段後書寫,應該在試題紙背面寫作,寫作時不要求必須有From, To等內容,但若能準確而符合商務習慣地寫出備忘錄細節,無疑會增加文章的印象分,這裏簡單介紹一下備忘錄細節的注意事項。

To: 備忘錄對象

如果具體到人,最好寫出全名,不要寫自己的真實姓名,有作弊嫌疑,尤其不能“重名”,如Bill Tom,Bill和Tom都是名(Given name),而不是姓(Family name),一個簡單的處理方法就是use others?name,比如男名Bill Gates, Michael Scofield, Jay Chou或女名

From: 備忘錄作者

要點同上,一般不用尊稱,只有對方不知道自己身份的時候才後綴職位名稱

Date: 日期

BEC屬於英聯邦國家的考試,日期的寫法一般爲日、月、年,比如7 December 2002,注意月份用英文而不是數字,以免和日期混淆,可以縮寫,比如將一月寫作Jan(也可以用開放標點)。

Britney Spears, Jennifer Aniston等;若顯示關係親密,還可以把名字縮寫,比如B. Gates, M. Scofield, J. Chou, B. Spears, J. Aniston等;如果寫給上級,還應該加上尊稱甚至職位,比如Mr. Bill Gates — Managing Director, Mr. Jay Chou — Art Director等;現代商務寫作中流行開放標點(Open Punctuation),即標點不影響理解的時候可以不用,所以Mr./Ms./Mrs.後面的省略點也可以省去,簡單寫成Mr/Ms/Mrs;最好不要省去名字。

範文示例

To: All Staff

From: Bill Gates

Date: 7 December 2002

Subject: Staff Reward

The profits of our company this month went up 10% compared with the same period last year, due to your hard work and long working hours. I would like to thank you for your long devoted service. A trip to Hawaii has been arranged next month as a prize. Enjoy