11月20日GRE作文機經Argument

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11月20日GRE作文機經Argument

題目

The following appeared in a recommendation from the planning department of the city of Transopolis.

"Ten years ago, as part of a comprehensive urban renewal program, the city of Transopolis adapted for industrial use a large area of severely substandard housing near the freeway. Subsequently, several factories were constructed there, crime rates in the area declined, and property tax revenues for the entire city increased. To further revitalize the city, we should now take similar action in a declining residential area on the opposite side of the city. Since some houses and apartments in existing nearby neighborhoods are currently unoccupied, alternate housing for those displaced by this action will be readily available."

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

 翻譯

以下文字出自Transopolis市規劃部門的一封推薦信

“十年前,作為一項綜合城市改造項目的一部分,Transopolis市為了工業用途在高速路附近改造了一大片嚴重低於標準的住房。隨後,那裏建立了若干工廠,犯罪率降低了,全市資產税收入增加。為進一步使城市繁榮,我們應該在城市另一側的正在衰落的居住區採取類似的行動。由於現有鄰近社區的一些住宅和公寓無人居住,可為這一行動產生的搬遷户提供現成的備用房。”

寫一篇文章,闡述需要哪些具體的證據來評價這個論證過程,並解釋這些證據如何削弱或強化這個論證過程。

分析

前提:改造大片不達標住房何況以使城市返祖率降低,資產税收增加+some houses and apartments in existing nearby neighborhoods are currently unoccupied, alternate housing for those displaced by this action will be readily available

[譯]由於現有鄰近社區的一些住宅和公寓無人居住,可為這一行動產生的搬遷户提供現成的備用房

結論:To further revitalize the city, we should now take similar action in a declining residential area on the opposite side of the city

[譯]為進一步使城市繁榮,Transopolis市應該在城市另一側的正在衰落的居住區採取類似十年前的行動

論據:

1. Ten years ago, as part of a comprehensive urban renewal program, the city of Transopolis adapted for industrial use a large area of severely substandard housing near the freeway

[譯]十年前,作為一項綜合城市改造項目的一部分,Transopolis市為了工業用途在快速路附近改造了一大片嚴重低於標準的住房

2. Several factories were constructed there, crime rates in the area declined, and property tax revenues for the entire city increased

[譯]那裏建立了若干工廠,犯罪率降低了,全市資產税收入增加

 提綱(可攻擊點)

1、在高速路附近修建低標準住房對於在該地建立工廠有哪些影響?建立工廠都要考慮哪些因素?

2、在高速路附近修建低標準住房對於在該地犯罪率有哪些影響?犯罪率的高低是由哪些因素共同決定的?

3、在高速路附近修建低標準住房對於在該地資產税收增加有哪些影響?資產税收是由哪些因素共同決定的?

4、十年前的經驗對於現在是否依然適用?可能會存在哪些問題?

5、在高速路附近修建低標準住房的經驗,對於生在衰落的居住區能夠適用?可能存在哪些問題?

6、無人居住的住宅和公寓能否直接被用來做備用房?產權等問題如何處理?