1、（a）軟弱、羞怯的： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 讀完此信後倘您認爲敝人可補缺，敝人願和您一談。
(b)改寫後（較佳）： If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
2、（a）懷疑，不妥、不安全的： If you‘re interested, let me know immediately, as I‘m sure and interview will convince you I‘m the man for the job. 倘貴公司有興趣，請即告知，敝人深信與您面談可以使您相信，敝人適合擔任此職。
（b）改寫後： May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone at Taipei 884525 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 可否賜予面談？您可在每天上午七至九時，下午五時半至九時電884525號。
3、陳腐的句子： Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……（我希望您惠予面談） Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……（等候您的'佳音） Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(靜候滿意的答覆)
4、哀求式的句子，不夠完整（漏掉面談時間）： Won‘t you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Kenmore 69781. 懇請惠予面談。請打電話K-69781
（b）改寫後： May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Kenmore 69781. You can reach me between nine and five o‘clock during the day. 可否惠予面談以便進一步商討？我的電話是K-69781。我從上午九時到下午五時都可接通。