一篇好的四級作文，要注意兩點：一，要緊扣題目要求;二，要在評論的基礎上亮出自己的觀點。下面是小編整理的兩篇英語四級作文及點評，歡迎欣賞!
The Big is the Little
Nothing can be done except little by little, the French poet Baudelaire Charles once said. Most people, however, often ignore such a truth. So does the little boy shown in the picture. He expresses his worries to his father about disposing of nuclear waste, but is told that he can achieve nothing if he doesn’t empty the dustbin first.
Every single little thing you can do today matters. The truth has been tested for ages, and thousands of great people have set good examples for us. For instance, Leonardo da Vinci, the world-renowned master in painting, starts his career with repeated egg-drawing. Lu Xun, the great man of letters, reminded himself to get up early by inscribing the character “morning” on his desk.
As university students, in my opinion, we should aim high, but at the same time, we shall never measure a task by its size. All in all, only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly will acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.
【點評】
本次四級作文爲看圖作文，探討的'話題是“一屋不掃，何以掃天下”。這個話題較爲常見，一般考生對此都比較熟悉，所以對考生來說難度不大。一篇好的四級作文，要注意兩點：一，要緊扣題目要求;二，要在評論的基礎上亮出自己的觀點。
範文開頭第一句就開門見山，引用名言，亮出觀點，簡短而有力。緊接着又用圖片中所給的故事，作爲論據支撐。這樣以來，既避免了直接敘述故事帶來的突兀感，又使故事更好的支持論點。
第二段作者進一步分析深入論證自己觀點。通過中外兩個“從小事做起的”偉人的例子做論證，使論點更爲飽滿，更具說服力。
第三段作者從自身出發，指出大學生對“一屋不掃”應該具備積極的態度。文章最後，以名言作結，切中主題，鏗鏘有力。
現代信息技術對人們交流模式的影響
The modern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people. With the help of the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere. However, the side effect is that many people have become over-dependent on the Internet and neglected face-to-face communication.
As far as I'm concerned, electronic communication cannot fully replace the direct contact among people. Although it seems to bring everyone together, it actually estranges people and decreases the effectiveness of communication. A typical example is that, traditionally, people working in the same office simply walk to others and talk. Today, however, co-workers tend to send e-mails or instant messages through the Internet even when they are sitting next to each other. As words can never convey the full message, it usually takes much more time and rounds of conversation than face-to-face communication, in which people can discuss more directly with less loss of information.
To conclude, the Internet enables more effective communication in some situations, but over-dependence on it actually pulls people apart.
點評：
本次四級作文形式仍爲漫畫題，探討因特網等現代信息技術對人們交流模式的影響。話題貼近日常生活，難度中等。題目要求簡述網絡的影響，並解釋“電子通訊能否替代面對面的交流”，考生需要明確給出正面或反面的觀點。
如選擇“可以替代”，可考慮從信息技術先進程度、交流方式多樣化(文字、語音、視頻)等方面舉例論述。如選擇“不可替代”，則可強調信息技術無法實現的方面，如面對面情感交流、文字信息內容傳達的不完整性，或是網絡技術的不穩定、不可靠等方面。