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Passage One
綜合寫作：古埃及金字塔內有shaft，考古學家提出了三種purpose
閱讀-三個purpose
1.用作爲ventilation，工人可以在塔裏呼吸;
2.出於宗教目的，shaft的位置類似於星星，象徵god;
3.用作爲passageways，這樣國王死後可以travel through。
聽力講座一一反駁
two pairs of S rising from tomb可以bring air，其他不可以，而且其他建的S都是similar的，所以只有兩個並不能用來讓worker呼吸;
2.埃及人用specific star象徵specific god在later time，S build 在早期並沒有記錄提到這種宗教象徵;
3.埃及人確實相信king spirit死後會迴歸，但並不是通過actual door，其他金字塔內的都是symbol door，所以這個不是
新託福綜合寫作考題解析
經典Task2 Paired-choice Agreement/Disagreement同意與否觀點闡述類題目，只需闡明觀點同意與否，並給出合理解釋即可。此題無論同意與否, 只要給出合理的解釋即可，可採用推理與事實論證的方法進行細節擴充。
參考答題思路：
1、Agreement:
SD理由：
① Love of beauty is common to all men.
② It is an era that good-looking deserves the best.
③ The risks and hazards associated with plastic surgery have been greatly minimized due to the developing technology.
④ A way to set up self-confidence.
2、 Disagreement:
SD理由:
① It’s pretty risky to do this since some surgery failed.
② A waste of money if the changed appearance does not lead to good results.
③ People will be addicted if they do once or twice, even more (e.g. Michael Jackson)
④ It is not the real beauty.
新託福寫作解析:
這次考的是archaeology類，常規題型。在邏輯上，是閱讀提出三個論點， 聽力一一提出反駁，認爲這三個論點不成立。綜合寫作整體難度中等。可以採取這樣的寫作思路
In the lecture, The professor argues that . However, the reading material contends that …. /The professor casts doubt on the reading by using a number of points that are contrary to the reading passage.
The first point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that …
Secondly, according to the professor…, which differs from the reading in that the reading states …
Finally, the professor argues that …, while the reading material suggests that …
Passage Two
話題類別：兒童教育類
What is the most important do you think to share with a young child (age 5-10)?
1. Being well organized
2. Being honest
3. Being helpful to others
題目翻譯：
分享給5到10歲的孩子以下三個價值觀，哪一個是最重要?
1.樂於助人
2.誠實
3.組織有序
新託福寫作考試 點評：
本次託福獨立寫作是兒童教育類，新題，但也是傳統的兒童教育類，意思是你認爲要跟小孩分享的事情最重要的是哪一個，第一是要讓他們生活有條理，第二是要誠實，第三是要樂於助人，典型的三選一題型，還是用上課時候講過的文章結構和方法去寫作即可，可以兩段支持段加一段反證段，也可以一段支持段加兩段反證段，靈活使用即可。這裏選擇第一個。
首先，being organized是他們今後獨立生活的必備能力。其實現在很多孩子的小時候的生活都是父母在安排，孩子只要被動的接受並且執行，其實沒有自己的想法，而這則會使他們對父母產生過度的依賴，會對他們獨立生活會產生消極影響，導致自己無法自理生活，而如果從小就學習如何能夠井井有條的安排自己的生活的話，他們以後就可以自己很獨立很好的生活。
其次，being organized能減輕他們以後生活和學習的壓力。其實，現在很多學生都有拖延症，就是因爲不會安排自己的時間，導致拖到最後自己壓力很大，這甚至到high-level education還會發生，所以being organized是一種管理生活和學習的能力，能夠考慮好每件事情要做的時間點，知道在正確時間做正確的事情，這樣的話不僅可以按時完成自己的學習或者工作任務，還可以讓自己的生活壓力減緩很多。
另外，being honest雖然也很重要，但其實在今後的生活中，一個人是很難保持百分之百誠實的，因爲有一些場合是需要說謊的，比如說有些善意的謊言，而且在某些情況下，誠實反而會冒犯到他人，比如直接指出他人的缺陷或者短處，所以說孩子應該要在自己的`生活和社交過程中去體會如何在不冒犯他人的情況下去保持誠實，這是在他們小時候可能無法理解的事情，這是需要時間去磨練和積累的。當然，being helpful也是一個很重要的品質，但同樣地，幫助他人也要看情況，不能一味的幫助他們，這樣的話有時候使得他人對自己產生過度的依賴，反而對他們的能力產生負面效果。而這些也是孩子在小時候難以學習的道理。
詞彙：
1. traditional virtue 傳統道德
2. absolute truth 完全的事實
3. Confrontation 對抗
4. Blotch 弄髒
mma 困境、窘境
6. in the long run 長期
7. betrayal 背叛
8. overwhelm 勝過
9. derive from 從...獲得
新託福獨立寫作範文一:
The traditional virtue of honesty in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in today’s world. Many believe that being honest is not always the best policy when dealing with people and shall not be shared with children. Be that as it may, this essay will explore the importance of being honest in relationships between people.
Undeniably, Sharing values of being honest exposes children to the cruel world. We all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear or say. Even, many would agree that if a company is to tell the absolute truth about it’s products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the products. The same logic also applies to human relationships. if your friend had worn a newly purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you freely express your opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she’s currently wearing? and spoil her birthday? unarguably, hiding(entirely or particularly) the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided.
However, there is always the risk factor of the truth emerging sooner or later when telling an untruth. the basic trust in any relationships friends,parents and children will be blotched, and would have an impact on the future relationship between both parties. the story of the “the boy who cried wolf” fully illustrates the consequences of telling lies. no one will believe you when you’re telling the truth. Therefore, after presenting the value of honesty to children, they will avoid falling in the dilemma.
In addition, another “bad factor” of telling untruths is that you have absolutely no control over when the truth will emerge. untruths breed pain in both parties: tears when the truth is uncovered after a period of time; in the long run, it seems that hiding the truth is not beneficial to either party. In contrast, delivering the value of being honest to children, children will have no worries of fearing the truth to be exposed. Therefore, the life will be easier than those choosing to cover up the secrets.
Everyone hates betrayal. even if it is the trend to occasionally hide the truth in relationships, it is strongly recommended that not to follow that trend as the risk and the consequences of the truth unfolded overwhelms the minimal advantages one can derive from not telling the truth. After all, it is understood that relationships are founded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”. Indeed honesty is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. As a result, this value should be shared greatly.(word count: 472)