中考英語寫作練習4-6：命題作文並根據中文提示寫作
4. "Growing Pains and Gains"
●一個戴深度近視眼鏡的女孩面對一大堆的作業
●一個小女孩在彈鋼琴，母親站在旁邊拿着尺
●小女孩和許多人在開生日晚會，臉上露出微笑
●小女孩孜孜不倦地在看書
參考作文
I think I have a happy life, though sometimes I cannot do the things I like. For example, I like reading different kinds of books in my spare time, especially some detective stories. But my mum always asks me to practise playing the piano one hour every day. That's boring. I like having parties with my friends during the holidays. But I have to do lots of homework. Teachers always give us more homework when we have holidays. That's my growing pains and gains.
5. "Changes in Shanghai"
●300年前的上海
●上海的今天(東方明珠、金茂大廈)
●上海的明天(2010年的世博會)
參考作文
Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.
Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall buildings have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.
Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Exp0 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.
6. "An Accident"
●四個孩子剛出校門回家
●一卡車經過，車速較快，掉下幾隻西瓜
●一騎車人倒下，身邊有血
● 孩子們有的打110，有的打120，有的保護現場
●他們向警察陳述經過，救護車把傷者送醫院
參考作文
Last Thursday afternoon, four students were on their way back home. Suddenly they saw a truck coming round the corner at a high speed and some watermelons fell off. At the same time, a middle-aged man on a bicycle fell to the ground. Blood came from his body. One of them called the policeman, one dialed 120. and the others were taking care of the cyclist. Soon the police came and they reported what they had seen and an ambulance took the cyclist to the hospital soon.
中考英語寫作提升週週練+範文精講
假設你叫 Lily，是學校英語角的主持人，你收到了 Tom 的一封來信。請你根據他的來信內容寫一封回信，針對他的煩惱，談談你的.看法，提出一些建議，並鼓勵他努力學習。
Dear Lily,
I’m not happy these days. You know, I’m in Grade 9 this term. Every day I have too much homework to do and when I finish my homework, it’s late into midnight. I have no time to have fun. I’m so tired. What should I do?
Yours,
Tom
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
Nice to hear from you. I can understand your feeling. Too much homework makes us bored and tired. But on the other hand, homework is good for our studies.
But if you really don’t like it, why not go to your teachers and tell them your feelings? Maybe they will give less homework. Besides, it’s also a good idea to make full use of your time, and then you may have some time to relax. Anyway I hope you can enjoy your study. There is a saying, “No pains, no gains.” I think if you work hard, you’ll have a bright future.
Yours,
Lily
範文講解
審題要點：1.複述他的煩惱，談看法。2.提出一些建議。3.鼓勵努力學習
一. 針對煩惱談看法：Nice to hear from you. I can understand your feeling. Too much homework makes us bored and tired. But on the other hand, homework is good for our studies.
精彩句子：I can understand your feeling. But on the other hand….
點評：注意一定不能上去就談看法，而要先複述煩惱，並且要有感同身受。接下來，也不要直接說建議，而要先說自己的看法，而且要是積極的。On the other hand 是個非常好的過渡，以後可以常用。
中考英語寫作提升週週練+範文精講
中考英語記敘文範文：關於母親節的(根據提示寫短文)
中考英語記敘文範文：關於母親節的(根據提示寫短文)
昨天5月13日，星期天，母親節，我在花園裏摘了一些花給母親，爸爸到商店爲她買了一條漂亮的女裙和一條項鍊(necklace)。 下午我們看京劇，晚上我們一起去市中心的餐館吃飯。根據上面提示寫一篇短文。
Yesterday was Sunday. May13, Mother’s Day.I got up early in the morning and then went to the garden. I picked some beautiful flowers and give them to my mother, saying “Happy Mother’s Day”. She answered with a smile “Thank you.” My father bought her a nice skirt and a necklace.?In the afternoon we went to watch Beijing Opera together. In the evening we went to restaurant in the centre of the city and we had a nice meal that day, we had a good time.
中考英語記敘文範文：探病(根據提示寫短文)
中考英語記敘文範文：探病(根據提示寫短文)
上週，Jim生病住院，我們去看他 ，他很高興，他說他在那已呆了兩天，他對這個月月底的考試感到緊張。因爲他很多課都沒上，糟糕的天氣也對他的情緒產生影響。我們叫他別緊張，我們可以輪流幫他學習功課，我們也會帶些CD來讓他聽音樂。他很高興。
Jim is ill last week. We went to see him. He was very glad. He said he stayed there alone for two days. He was nervous about the test at the end of this month because he missed lots of lesssons. And the bad weather affected his feelings, too.?We asked him to take it easy because we could take turns to help him with his lessons. And we would bring some CDs to him so that he could listen to music. He was very pleased.