託福寫作要簡潔，簡潔是託福寫作中的非常重要的一點，很多考生都因爲追求字數或是繁瑣句式的原因而使自己的託福，從而影響成績。現在小編就爲大家一些建議讓你的託福寫作變得簡潔。
建議一： 避免空洞的單詞和詞組
1. 在託福寫作中，一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能爲句子帶來任何相關的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：
When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
這句話當中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多餘。完全可以去掉。改爲：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換，例如：
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子，可以替換，簡化爲下面的表達方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
建議二： 避免重複
1. 在託福寫作中，儘量避免重複使用同樣的詞彙。或者有的時候雖然詞彙沒有重複，但意思卻有重複。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子：:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large 對一個farm來說就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改爲：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更簡潔的表達方式爲：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換，例如：
My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
這裏的over and over again就可以改爲repeatedly，顯得更爲簡潔：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.